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Petra's avatar

I read this as one of the most honest and raw prayers ever uttered. It brings the whole mess of being human to the altar and asks its question anyway, wanting so badly for the answer to be yes. <3

Earl Nobdy's avatar

I am definitely asking you to blurb my poetry book (if I ever put one out). Thanks for all your kind words

Petra's avatar

I’d be honored. <3

Suzie's avatar

Gonna garrotte this night 🖤

incredible piece and a pleasure for earholes

Earl Nobdy's avatar

From my mouth to yr ears

Suzie's avatar

everyday thank god!

t-raise us up with Thérèse's avatar

A delight to read and appreciate in the creative side of my brain as well.

Ray Sweatman's avatar

Intense. And what Petra said!

t-raise us up with Thérèse's avatar

"Repent recant relent

Swear promises I’ll never keep

Write lines of miles before I sleep."

I repent,

swear I'll reach my goals while rarely making it,

but often write miles of lines before I sleep.

2 out of 3 ain't too bad, is it?

Earl Nobdy's avatar

You’re on the right track. Keep going